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Please offer at least ten substantive comments within the body of the essay you
Please offer at least ten substantive comments within the body of the essay you are reviewing (for example, in Microsoft Word, you’d go to Insert> New Comment). You might use these questions to guide your comments:
If this was my paper, what would I change about the hook and why?
If this was my paper, would I make the claim clearer and why?
If this was my paper, would I provide any more definitions or context in the introduction, and why?
If this was my paper, would I revise any of my transitions in the body paragraph, and why?
If this was my paper, would I expand my conclusion and why?
At the end of the essay, draft a brief paragraph that highlights the strengths of the essay as well as the two areas of concern the author noted. Upload the reviewed document in response to the original post and move on to a second essay.
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