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Essay Two Peer Review Guide: What are the Causes of Group Disparities?
Does the
Essay Two Peer Review Guide: What are the Causes of Group Disparities?
Does the essay answer the question: What are the causes of group disparities?
Does the essay begin by explaining what the issue is and why society considers it a problem? For example what are some disparities in our society that concern people?
Does the essay start each body paragraph with the claim that will be supported in that paragraph and does the essay have a logic of organization that is expressed in bridges that shows how each new claim is related to the previous claim?
Does the essay define key terms as necessary?: disparity, equity, equality, racism according to Kendi, disparity fallacy, acting white? Your own definition of racism?
Does the essay provide a rich and accurate summary of Kendi’s chapter, including a good first sentence following the formula we’ve practiced?
Does the essay provide a rich and accurate summary of the Hughes selection, including a good first sentence?
Does the essay show where the writer agrees with Kendi? And does it support that agreement with examples from the readings, scenarios, the writer’s own experience?
Does the essay show where the writer disagrees with Kendi? And does it support that disagreement with examples from the readings, scenarios, the writer’s own experience?
Does the essay show where the writer agrees with Hughes? And does it support that agreement with examples from the readings, with scenarios, with the writer’s own experience?
Does the essay show where the writer disagrees with Hughes? And does it support that disagreement with examples from the readings, scenarios, the writer’s own experience?
Does the essay bring in Chetty or Fryer (or both) to support and add richness or nuance to the writer’s own position? How do their arguments tie in to the arguments of Kendi or Hughes?
Does the essay have a Works Cited page that accurately includes the sources cited in the essay?
Review quotations for proper integration—Method 1, 2, 3?—and parenthetical citation. Point out specific spots that need revision.
14. Sentence Craft. Pick a paragraph and make editing suggestions on clarity, punctuation, parallelism, word choice. If you can mark directly on the draft, great. If not, you could paste the paragraph into your reply work on it that way. Be resourceful. Be helpful!
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